Wednesday, August 19, 2015

We should not allow pets in school - Term 3 Week 4



WALT persuade other students to agree with our opinion.  This the purpose for my writing.
Success Criteria:
  1. I plan for a writing task
  2. I write a variety of sentence lengths with different sentence starters
  3. Give reasons with detail - use specific words
  4. I write most topic and high frequency words correctly.
  5. I use capital letters, fullstops, question marks and exclamation marks correctly.
  6. Use persuasive language


Pets should not be allowed in school.            

I think pets should not be allowed in school.
     
The pets could get lost jumping through a window and they can also get lost on the roofs from a ladder on the other side  of the school and then they had to live there or they can get lost in the class back room at school.     
The classrooms will be full of pets as well.  
                                                
Another reason could be pets could chase you out of the school and make you get lost far away from school. They could chase you around the whole school and make you dizzy and get sick for a long time and they can chase you into the back room and make you get stuck for a long time.        
                                                
Also, when it is maths time, the pets can stop you from really important learning. They can stop you from a game and get you hit in the head by a ball or you can look one way and trip over.  If  someone gives you your computer and you drop it because a kitten trips you up, you are going to  be sad.  

Therefore, I strongly believe that Pets should not be allowed in schools.    

2 comments:

  1. I like your detail about what might happen if you drip over a kitten. It is a really good point. I also like your persuasive writing sentence starter 'another reason'. Well done Ella.

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